I was originally going to give Jason a bigger role, but then I realised that it's not really a slumber party until someone falls asleep halfway through. This is hilarious and also very true.
Glencoe is actually not that far from where I live! I mean, it's not close, but you can drive there.
once upon a time, Magik saved this random US town from eldritch creatures, so now the place is kind of a safehouse for her. Is that a thing that happened in X-Men and I missed it? Or is it a thing that happened in the backstory for your fic?
“When last I used my power, I tore the world apart and brought Hell to Earth. You do not want me on your side.” Illyana’s hands are shaking slightly around her cup, long nails clicking against the porcelain. She is not lying but she is not telling the whole truth, either. There are dark shadows haunting her eyes, remnants of hellfire and divine wrath. This whole paragraph is really nice--it flows really well and the details are great.
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Date: 2015-10-10 12:21 am (UTC)This is hilarious and also very true.
Glencoe is actually not that far from where I live! I mean, it's not close, but you can drive there.
once upon a time, Magik saved this random US town from eldritch creatures, so now the place is kind of a safehouse for her.
Is that a thing that happened in X-Men and I missed it? Or is it a thing that happened in the backstory for your fic?
“When last I used my power, I tore the world apart and brought Hell to Earth. You do not want me on your side.” Illyana’s hands are shaking slightly around her cup, long nails clicking against the porcelain. She is not lying but she is not telling the whole truth, either. There are dark shadows haunting her eyes, remnants of hellfire and divine wrath.
This whole paragraph is really nice--it flows really well and the details are great.