dhampyresa

Thanks for the pep talk. I just need the motivation to edit them, lmao.

(It was going to be called "A Measure of Wisdom" and structured based on these lines from the Havamal:
54. A measure of wisdom | each man shall have,
But never too much let him know;
The fairest lives | do those men live
Whose wisdom wide has grown.

55. A measure of wisdom | each man shall have,
But never too much let him know;
For the wise man's heart | is seldom happy,
If wisdom too great he has won.

56. A measure of wisdom | each man shall have,
But never too much let him know;
Let no man the fate | before him see,
For so is he freest from sorrow.

It had a framing device of Melisandre talking to the Lord of Light (who is post-Ragnarok!Balder) and then tying various GoT gods and what not to Norse myths. The Drowned God was Njord, iirc. I basically gave up because I no longer feel fannish about GoT.)

Honestly, I don't think my problem is SPAG. My SPAG's fine, it's more bigger picture things I have trouble with? And also just doing the thing.